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Julie Gabrielli's avatar

What a treat to read this again. I picked up so much from the early part of the story that I missed the first time. The careful plants and setups, what meticulous craft, Adam! And this nearly broke me: "stare too hard into the Ink, and it will drive a black spike through your heart. Ten seconds after that you’re crying because you think you’re seeing God."

Adam Nathan's avatar

Thank you for noticing. Yes, many painstaking little details.

Julie Gabrielli's avatar

I’m with you on that.

Stephanie Sweeney's avatar

Yep this one wrecked me and stayed with me.